http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/ (as an examplar of using HKEdCity's blog for language teaching) Fri, 19 Mar 2010 13:16:32 +0000 http://lyceum.ibiblio.org/?v=1.0.2 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1947 Wed, 30 Apr 2008 11:31:20 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1947 Nice. Nice.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1946 Wed, 30 Apr 2008 11:30:41 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1946 Please write more about the three diners and how the story ends. Please write more about the three diners and how the story ends.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1945 Wed, 30 Apr 2008 11:29:18 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1945 Good use of adjectives to describe people. You should also write about what happened to the dog. Good use of adjectives to describe people. You should also write about what happened to the dog.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1944 Wed, 30 Apr 2008 11:27:59 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1944 You should pay more attention to punctuation. In the sentence "When they saw the dog was kicked. They were really angry and they left the restaurant immediately.", you should use a comma instead of a full stop. You should pay more attention to punctuation. In the sentence “When they saw the dog was kicked. They were really angry and they left the restaurant immediately.”, you should use a comma instead of a full stop.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1943 Wed, 30 Apr 2008 11:26:44 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2008/04/30/continue-this-story-for-6a-students/#comment-1943 What happened to the three diners then? What happened to the three diners then?

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